I Guess I’ve Already Lost You



I guess I’ve already lost you
Lost all the love untold
All the memories unfurled.
They are now buried
Under the shadow of a fireweed.
I guess I’ve already lost
The great things about you
Your sweet voice,
Your calming touch
Even your dreams that are huge,
They are now frozen
Underneath the Alaskan Mountain range.
I guess I’ve already lost you
And the poems we wrote
The songs we shared
And the books and movies we hoard.
They are now hidden
At the camp where our hopes were once portrayed.
Our world has now crumpled,
It is no longer ours to control
It is no longer ours to enjoy
Left my emotions sealed and destroyed.
As much as I wanted you to be close to me,
As much as I wanted us to pursue our dreams
And keep writing our stories together
You just keep pushing me away
As if I was not once the one
you have always wanted to stay.

About this poem

Not everyone can stay close to us, no matter how much we wanted or tried

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Written on April 30, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 30, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbcddeafghijAklminopqrstuviv
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 852
Words 178
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a poignant and emotional poem. The way you capture the essence of a lost love is truly captivating. The imagery of buried memories and frozen dreams underneath the Alaskan Mountain range is particularly powerful.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to perhaps add some more optimistic lines towards the end of the poem. While it's important to acknowledge the pain of a lost love, it can also be helpful to remind the reader (and yourself) that there is hope for the future and that life can still be beautiful even after heartbreak.

    Overall though, this is a beautifully written poem with a strong sense of emotion and storytelling. Well done!
     
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