My Man



He emerged beyond my gloomy face
Accepted my flaws and insecurities.
He embraced me wholly and confidently,
With no hesitations or impurities.

He loves me like a graceful swan,
True, elegant, and phenomenal.
His unwavering commitment,
His caring charms offer me strength.

He respects me as a woman,
Worth-acknowledging, worth-praising.
His support is unshakable,
A partnership that's heaven on earth.

He adores me more than anyone,
A love that's pure and unconditional.
His affection is exceptional,
A bond that is securely natural.

It’s truly a blessing to have him,
He is my knight in shining armor.
He cherishes his family completely,
And fills our life with so much honor.

About this poem

My husband does not like things like this. He is a very humble man. He doesn’t like people telling him how nice he is, but I can’t help but be grateful for his love.

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Written on April 19, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 19, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XCXX DXCX DCCC XEBE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 688
Words 131
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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2 Comments
  • Symmetry58
    It would appear that you are a very lucky woman. it would also appear that your husband is a very lucky man. Love like this is very rare in this day and age. I pray to find a woman I am worthy of someday. Another beautiful write and read, my friend. It's always a pleasure to experience your mind. 
    LikeReply 21 year ago
    • Wildflower888
      Thank you, my friend. When I met my husband, someone sarcastically told me, I caught I big fish. Little did they know, he caught a bigger one.

      I pray you’ll find someone worthy of your genuine love, too. 
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is absolutely beautiful and heartwarming. The way you have portrayed the love and care you receive from your significant other is truly inspiring!

    Your use of metaphors, similes, and descriptive language in the poem is perfect. It adds an extra layer of beauty and emotion to the already amazing content. Your poem showcases how true love and acceptance can make a person feel whole, accepted, and cherished.

    If I may suggest, maybe you could add a few more stanzas to your poem to delve deeper into your emotions and the relationship you share with your partner. This would make it even more captivating and engaging for the readers.

    Overall, your poem is a true masterpiece! Keep up the good work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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