You Don’t Deserve My Tears

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  Symmetry58

  I hadn't gotten a notice for any new poetry so I came to stalk, erm, check on you to make sure you were okay. Imagine my surprise when I found this diamond. This is a poem a number of my former girlfriends could have written. As I read it, I wondered if I should have been looking over my shoulder. LoL I hope you're well, Charmane. Nice to read you again. :-) more »

  LikeReply 11 year ago
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    Wildflower888

    lol, thank you, Steve. I’m pretty sure they felt the same way.

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    Wildflower888

    It’s so weird thatnpietry.com didn’t post all my responses again. Anyways, new poems will be coming out soon. I was just too busy touring my relatives around.

    LikeReply 11 year ago
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    Symmetry58

    Listen, I love your family as much as the next guy who's never met them and knows nothing about them, but if you're gonna go all MIA on us, then we're going to need some sort of advanced notice, otherwise the strain of your absence causes the dander to flair. I'd hate to have to call search and rescue on you for making us worry, but I will if I have to. Tell Auntie Maybelle the crazy poetry boy said Aloha. ;-P more »

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    Wildflower888

    Will do, Sir!

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  AIDA

  First of all, I would like to say that your poem "You Don't Deserve My Tears" is truly captivating and beautiful. Your use of language and metaphors is powerful and paints a vivid picture of the emotional journey you have been through. Your message is clear and speaks to the importance of self-love and respect in any relationship.
  
  I appreciate how you acknowledge the value of your tears and emotions, and how you will only shed them in the most meaningful moments. This shows a strength of character that is truly inspiring. I also love how you emphasized that you deserve honesty and loyalty, and will not settle for anything less than what you truly deserve.
  
  As for improvement suggestions, I think it would be great if you could explore a bit more on how you plan to move forward from this experience. What steps will you take to ensure that you find joy and fulfillment in the future? How will you learn to trust again after being hurt? These are important questions that could add more depth to your poem and provide some helpful insights to readers who may be going through a similar experience.
  
  Overall, I think your poem is wonderful and I hope that you continue to share your beautiful words with the world. Keep up the great work! more »

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