Woman in her thirties on the verge of a nervous breakdown



On the verge of a nervous breakdown
I stay awake all day and night,
Insomnia takes me over
There's a hunger which kills me inside.

On the verge of a nervous breakdown
I climb the stairs towards my heavenly father,
With a tear in her eyes a woman starts to shout
My hands dig into dirt to cover my mouth.

On the verge of a nervous breakdown
We all start to think of death just like hungry babies
stretching their hands to their mother's breasts
ask to drink the milk of a fake eternity bless.

Too long awake as I walk between these walls,
Too long thinking of meanings of life as it goes
I hear myself fainting inside,
I'm a woman in her thirties on the verge of a nervous breakdown.
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Written on July 04, 2007

Submitted by mariaane04 on March 13, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axbc Abxx Axxx xxca
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 685
Words 142
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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3 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and emotional poem! Your use of vivid imagery and strong emotions really made me feel the weight of the narrator's struggle. Your words beautifully highlight the human condition of feeling overwhelmed and lost in the face of life's challenges.

    As far as areas for improvement, perhaps adding some more concrete details or personal anecdotes could help make the poem even more impactful. Additionally, maybe experimenting with different forms or structures could add even more depth and dimension to your already impressive writing. Overall, amazing job and I look forward to reading more of your work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • luisestable1
    There is a lot of tumult, but why? One does not know exactly what is binging all of this, only that she is on the verge of a nervous breakdown.
    The real cause of all of this is for the reader to guess.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Soulofdivya
    Relatable and I specially liked the title!Please could you check out my latest poems and drop me a quick comment.Would also love if you could follow me on Instagram @soulofdivya.Many thanks!
    LikeReply1 year ago

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