The Weather of the Mind



I saw a foggy figure
That was swimming in the wind.
The air was pushing back on him
And ripping at the skin.
So bent beneath the heavy rain
That hammered on his thought,
He'd lost himself in storminess
And shiny days forgot.
He was digging through the darkness
In that chunky soup of night,
And crawling on two legs
To a distant muddy light.
But that glow was barely trying,
And it's seeker nearly blind,
Light was soon to be digested
By the weather of his mind.
Then coat was thrown out in the wind,
He gathered up the night,
Embraced it like an only friend
And held it to him tight.
He gave himself to burning cold.
He drank up all the rain.
His clothing sagged with sorrow,
But no longer soaked in pain.
Sometimes giving in becomes
The only path that's sane,
And a hardship is much harder
If we treat it like a chain.
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Submitted by BCByron on February 19, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKJLBMBBJNJOEPEQEAE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 820
Words 175
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

B.C. Byron

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  • francinek.81254
    I feel this poem shows how when a person wants to get away from something, even doing something that is hurting him in some way is ok.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Jewoo525
    It may not be the most technically impressive entry this contest; however, the dedication to the cohesiveness of the theme, it’s incredible imagery and expressions, and the tight ending conveying a solid message all contribute to this being a solid poem. A winning entry for sure! 
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • gabgreig
    I love the lyrical rythmn and mood of this poem. The imagery is strong and enchanting. It has a strong beginning, middle, and end. Unique, intriguing, and satisfying.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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