What the Lake Saw



The Moon saw itself on the face of a drowsy lake and said,
"I'm powerful."
The lake shimmered in amazement at the Moon's greatness.
Recognizing a watery surface,
the Moon panicked and thought,
"I'm drowning."

A woman looked closely at herself in the lake's mirror and said,
"I'm beautiful."
The lake rippled its surface in agreement
and the woman thought,
"except for those wrinkles."

A firefly danced at the water's edge thinking no one was watching and said,
"I'm happy."
The lake swayed with the music too,
but its timing wasn't as perfect as the firefly's.
The dancer saw its wavering twin and thought,
"why do I try?"

A painter nearby sighed peacefully as he bent over his work.
The lake slid gently onto the rocky shore and back again with its own bubbling sigh.
The man threw down his brush and said to the lake,
"why are you making fun of me?"

So man and woman,
firefly,
Moon,
to the lake won't be returning soon.
While water waves and ripples on
to anyone who comes along.

About this poem

Sometimes we are the lake, trying to share a good thought which is misinterprered by others. Sometimes we are the firefly, unable to enjoy moments because others may be watching.

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Written on August 05, 2022

Submitted by BCByron on August 15, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDX ABXDX AEXCDF XFXE XFGGXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 989
Words 209
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 6, 4, 6

B.C. Byron

Author of illustrated children's book A CAT NAMED LUMP Available on Amazon more…

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  • JKeMac
    I love the way in which you personified the lake and the descriptive words used. I thought the poem was clever and was structured really nicely with each stanza depicting different forms of life and how they saw their insecurities in the lake. Well done, a good write! 
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