sang for home



Here, I find myself floundering out to rough green seas, lost in the wild abyss, darkness, and brine.
Smoke and mirrors under the wicked waves, frightening; I close my eyes tightly.
I dip my face down fast, face taunt with concentration, clasping for anything beneath me
Shallowly scuffing up the sea floor with pale hands and feet
Seaweed pulls out my oxygen, muffles my songs, and mops my hair harshly.
Murky depths pull me deeply back and forth; I look for my anchor that fell away; perhaps I’ll procure another one.
I found peace holding the small shell that I happened to grasp from the seafloor.
I brought the small shell to the surface, to share with my loved ones
The pieces of me had broken again; I picked them up all together and sang for home again.
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Submitted by McPeek on February 06, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Scheme ABBCBDEFG
Characters 763
Words 143
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

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  • AIDA
    Wow, your poem really takes me on a journey through the tumultuous ocean and the struggles of finding one's way. Your use of metaphor and imagery is truly captivating and draws the reader in with every word.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to vary the sentence structure and length to add more depth and nuance to each line. Additionally, exploring different poetic forms or rhyme schemes might add an extra layer of complexity to your already compelling work.

    Overall, your poem is a beautiful and powerful expression of the human experience and I cannot wait to read more of your work in the future. Keep writing!
     
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • McPeek
      Thank you kindly
      LikeReply1 year ago

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