Hope Floats (Hurricane Katrina)



They came from every walk of life
Some traveling over many miles

Their only want, to ease the pain
And replace our frowns with smiles.

Giving up all the comforts of home
They took up our struggles to share

Never have I seen such compassion
Nor ever have I felt such care.

Sympathetic ears, reliving the terror
Of what so many had gone through

They faced discouragement and distrust
Yet their faith and love held true.

Not only those who came to serve
Lifting our spirits with their charms

But every city in the United States
Who welcomed us with open arms.

Slowly those dark clouds in our lives
Parted to let the new hope in

Slowly our frowns turned around
And we met them, grin for grin...

About this poem

This is a tribute to all who came to our aid after Katrina took our houses, our belongings, even our siblings, parents, grandparents and friends.

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Written on September 27, 2005

Submitted by jerrylogie on September 07, 2022

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XA XB XB XC XC XD XD XE XE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 699
Words 141
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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5 Comments
  • AIDA
    What a beautiful and inspiring poem! It captures the selfless and compassionate nature of those who come from all walks of life to help ease others' pain and bring smiles to their faces. Your words paint a vivid picture of the sacrifices these individuals make to serve others and the courage they exhibit in the face of discouragement and distrust.

    Your message is particularly powerful in today's world, where divisiveness and negativity can all too often dominate our discourse. It's heartening to be reminded of the kindness and generosity that still exist in our midst.

    As for suggestions for improvement, I might suggest playing with the structure of the poem a bit. Perhaps breaking up the lines into shorter stanzas would make it a bit easier to read and appreciate. Additionally, you might consider incorporating some musical elements, such as a rhyme scheme or repeated refrains, to make the poem feel more cohesive and memorable.

    Overall, though, this is a wonderful piece of work. Thank you for sharing it with us!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • WhyCantIUseMyOwnName
    Open heart, very little talent.
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • jerrylogie
      Well I WON 2 monthly contests and got a coffee cup for runner up on another one so how has your creative works been doing ? Check out Apr., June, July, Aug. and Septembers. Bur, I bow to you since you are the judge...... 
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • jerrylogie
      Anyone who reads your comments KNOWS 'WhyCantIUseMyOwnName' is the reason for the name....
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • WhyCantIUseMyOwnName
      Why? Just because I have a few standards and stick to them, instead of slavishly heaping praise and laud on any old fraud who thinks he can write? Even free verse has to have a modicum of quality, style, emotion, imagination, originality, or SOMETHING to make it actual poetry and not just words on paper. I am reminded of the old saying about monkey-written great novels. Now I remember why I quit this place last time - my works were published without my permission in a book I was truly ashamed to show my parents because of the poor quality of the other offerings in the book. If I had any money at all, I would pay for a few of my poems to be here, and then we would see who was in how many anthologies. 
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • jerrylogie
      I actually entered two of my works this last month. Please read and critique it for me also. I could use a professional opinion...... it's called Fantasies Flight
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thanks for this uplifting message that when we experience traumas in our personal lives, receiving compassionate help elevates both the giver and the receiver to a higher resting place.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • teril
    So, there is still hope for humanity. Thanks to all who had the courage to care and to act. I am sorry for your losses....
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • belindar.65825
    Beautiful work
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • jerrylogie
      Thank you for your kind words...
      LikeReply1 year ago

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