Black Rose

Adjekawen A. Jeremiah 1998 (Delta State, Nigeria)



How can I walk pass you on the road,
And not turn to look?
Fine little black Rose,
Bathing in the clearing of the moon.

Wow! An Elysium of beauty she's gained,
Burning in the bright flame of perfection.
Oh! Have I been drinking again,
Or that by her beauty my will is bent to submission?

 Wait a minute! Let me confirm.
She's beyond splendor, I confess.
Tell my companions to go without me,
Oh seven heavens, your beauty!
Ah, I must be drinking too much!

I am no peddler of oratories.
 I flirt not with my wordings.
What I say is true,
And what is true, I say and do.

My heart may be dead to feel.
Crucify me, not with it.
For my crush had crushed my clutches,
And the rose that once rose had rose to ashes.
My mind may be scarred and sore of late,
Potioned with the nectar of care and hate.
Damn me not by the cover,
 Else, again, I may suffer.

Twenty-four moons have burnt out over you under my consciousness.
 I have never been oblivious of your existence.
If I had initiated a "hello",
I feared your response would be hollow.

 I am no ardent worshiper,
Yet, I have prayed aloud and in whispers.
I am no die-hard believer of faith,
Yet, I believe our meeting is fate.

Fine little black Rose!
Fine little black Rose!
Do I stand a chance in this quest and strive?
Let me know before my rivals would arrive.

About this poem

The poem portrays the love-quest of the poet persona. The reader is informed of his feelings for a certain female, whom he praised a 'Black Rose', owing to her dark, yet beautiful complexion. We are drawn to the plight of the poet persona in stanza 6: despite the fact that he had fallen in love with the subject of the poem for over 2 years ("twenty-four moons"; line 1), he lacks the necessary boldness to communicate his feelings to the 'black Rose'. It is unveiled to the reader, the reason behind the poet persona's perceived fear: the lady he once loved had broken his heart. He pleads with the subject of the poem to judge him not by his ostensible disposition. (Stanza 5) In the ultimate stanza, the reader is told that the poet persona has finally mustered up the boldness to convey his feelings to the 'Black Rose ', pleading with her to tell him if he has a chance with her, that he may, probably, take the necessary steps before other of her suitors may arrive and take her away. 

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Written on March 21, 2022

Submitted by jerrylov322 on March 24, 2022

Modified by jerrylov322 on April 30, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxAx xbxb xxccx aadd xxeeffgg xxhh gxxf AAii
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,343
Words 295
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 8, 4, 4, 4

Adjekawen A. Jeremiah

Adjekawen Jeremiah Agberia hails from Ughelli south of Delta State, Nigeria. He is currently studying law at the Niger Delta University, Wilberforce Island, Bayelsa State, Nigeria. The young poet of Uhrobo origin, who started writing poetry at the age of fifteen, is the firstborn son, amongs three brothers, of a single mother. Works of poetry penned by A.A. Jeremiah (his pen name), are mostly centered around love, romance, politics and betrayal; and, a few, on melancholy and nature. more…

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