Solomon and Amanda



I saw two different unbreakable souls

Both were working on themselves to be in better molds

The other half is excited of what does the future holds

And the other one is focused on what he learns from the roads


They are both climbing up and reaching each summit

Clueless but wanting to collide again and meet

And when the time pass by and they are both on their feet

It could be the moment that their relationship go deep


Solomon believed that he should be a leader

Be calm through situations just like a good father

His mentality should be stable for his emotional partner

Communicate wise to be able to keep her


Amanda was used to be loved by a policeman

She probably see similarities with him and her great one

Courteous leaders and enthusiastic musicians

But he wishes she's not tired of less time and long distance


Their polarity is perfect and their energies are magic

She's feminine, he's masculine, She's expressive and he's stoic

They both should be patient 'till he can go for her and do it

And in that moment, they could share the world through art and good music
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Submitted by davetrinidadx on January 12, 2022

Modified by davetrinidadx on January 13, 2022

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Scheme X A A X X B B X C C C C D D X X E E X E
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
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Words 219
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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