Analysis of The endless night (sleep apnoea)

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



I lie awake the endless night
And try to sleep without success,
My breathing comes so haltingly
I'm in such deep distress.

The night-time seems eternity
Barely broken by my dreamless sleep,
Night creatures fill my worried mind
As round the house my cats do creep.

I feel fatigued all through the day
Yet in the night I lie awake,
Although I drowse from time to time
My great weariness cannot be slaked.

The clock torments with endless ticking
Yet the alarm will not resound,
Although I lie awake an forever
The daylight will not come around.

The night is like a creeping death
The Lord has sent to torment me,
My blindness lasts eleven hours
Then with a new day I can see.

I cling to daylight futilely
In hope of keeping away the night,
But all too soon I’m on my back
A victim again of my weary plight.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABCB CDXD XXXA XEXE XCXC CAXA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 01110101 11011100 101101 01110100 10101111 11011101 11011111 11011101 10011101 1111111 111001011 01111010 1001111 111011010 0111101 01110101 0111111 110101010 11011111 11111 011100101 11111111 0100111101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 851
Words 161
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

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