Analysis of In fallen view

Mark Cloutier 1972 (Kaneohe)



Set before us
Like the moon
In fallen view
The sun in blood
Floods the mind
As light awakens
Them to a night
Where thieves
Run across fields
Of golden roads
Plated and satiated
With blood thirst
Of greed and gold
As the eyes abandon
The moment of gold
As silver lined sheets
Cover them in the streets
And the moon
In fallen view
Arises the minds
Of houses that remain
And are set before us


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011 101 0101 0101 101 11010 1101 11 1011 1101 1001 111 1101 101010 01011 11011 101001 001 0101 01001 110101 011011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 368
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 314
Words per stanza (avg) 76
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