Analysis of Touching the Atlantic



As I lunged headlong into its warmth,
So I mused upon this ocean's past:
The divide between old and new,
A separation affording comfort,
A witness to the quest for freedom,
Great surf pounding wind-swept shores.

The water welcomed me in its energy,
Embracing me, albeit roughly,
While I thought of old ships lying wrecked,
Long since savaged and unsalvageable;
Feeling the urge to battle out further,
Only to hear the nannying lifeguard's whistle.

The ocean seems so vast, its horizons unbroken,
But all around me are invisible connections:
The paths of the great silver birds,
The tracks of fibers binding businesses,
Seeking to shrink this global village pond;
While here, on its western edge, I feel so small.


Scheme XXXXXX AAXBXB XXXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 111011101 00101101 001001010 010101110 1110111 01010101100 010101010 111111101 111001 1001110110 101101110 0101111010010 1101110100010 01101101 0111010100 1011110101 11111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 695
Words 119
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on August 22, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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