Analysis of Tenderness



That silken thread that binds ticking of the clock
with nestling of bees around the sundile outside
My love I have been looking for traces of us, far and wide
and none the wiser my saddened heart.

May those treasured moments of tenderness remain
you and me, behind the curtain of tears, the rain
and may the whitness of that first sigh
that warm shelter to us, never deny.


Scheme XAAX BBCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11011110101 11011010111 111111011011101 010101101 111010110001 101010101101 01011111 1110111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 365
Words 69
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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