Analysis of Such a Love
Dreams of such a love smirk
openly at the idea of statistical probability.
They are the same dreams that, with a little work,
make reaching the summit of Mount Everest as a double
amputee seem both manageable and reasonable.
Yet, every kiss remains my first warm shower
after surviving an avalanche on K2!
You are my rock, floating in air-
a river of new Christian faith
running through Judas’ disloyal veins!
In an instant's embrace you release me from
Samsara, after a thousand lifetimes of knowing
only of greed and murder. Dreams of this love laugh at
accepted principles of space and time, living
in a parallel universe that accepts no
logic. The existence of such trust
and molten passion is as
pleasant
as five
fresh
cups of
tea, after
forty days
of wandering
across the
Sahara,
drinking
only dirty
water.
If such a thing can last, maybe there’ll be a way to rid
Chernobyl of every last residue of radiation. Happily ever after is
as likely as an alcoholic’s
successful conversion to Islam.
Yet, when I look in your eyes,
I think, maybe the Messiah
will rebuild the Temple in Jerusalem tomorrow. For, after all, our love
suggests that the improbable, even the impossible, is simple.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111011 10010010101000100 11011110101 110010111001010 10111100001000 110010111110 1001011011 11111001 01011101 101100101 0110110111 010100101110 1011010111111 010100110110 0010101011 100010111 0101011 10 11 1 11 110 101 1100 010 010 10 1010 10 11011110110111 0101100110101010010101 11011010 010010101 1111011 11100010 10101000100011101101 011001001000100110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,159 |
Words | 207 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 37 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 951 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 207 |
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Submitted on May 02, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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