Analysis of Soaring Illuminating Aura



i may be young - but you dont have to - rub it in
i may be dumb - but that dont mean a thing - when you're in love
it may be - puppy love - and maybe - i'm your soul mate
you may never know - if you dont give us a chance to
slowly get over the awkward moments
and count the seconds until we make these minutes golden
talk on and on until we fall asleep
wake up in each others arms counting sheep

we're having too much fun to just stop and run away from it
theres gotta be a reason why - i'm feeling all so very numb
it could be the drugs - thats making your aura so illuminating
it could be that look in your eyes - like you just dont give a f*ck

i know we dont know each other that well
but whenever i look into your eyes
i feel like i've known you all my life
and if that isn't love, then i don't know what is


Scheme XXXXXXAA XXBB XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111110 11111111011101 1111010101111 1110111111011 1011001010 01010011111010 1101011101 1101101101 110111111010111 1101010111011101 1110111011010100 1111101111111011 1111111011 1010110111 111111111 011101111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 796
Words 179
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 204
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted on January 04, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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