Feeling Freedom Focused



i'm your safe haven
the warmth you bathe in
come to me when you're starving
cause i've got what you're craving

feel free to come to me
feel free to escape reality
i'm where ever you want me to be
if only you believed in me..believe in me

i'm your personal paradise
should it entice
to the calm, cool and nice
isnt this nice?..yeah isnt this nice
no surprise..its all at a price
a simple roll of the dice

feel free to come to me
feel free to escape reality
i'm where ever you want me to be
if only you believed in me..believe in me

when you're caving and you're crumbling
you can't find the right words so you're mumbling
and you feel like you can't do nothing
you're fumbling and you're tumbling down..
then your body is suddenly numbing
and now you see the end is coming...

feel free to come to me
feel free to escape reality
i'm where ever you want me to be
if only you believed in me..believe in me

sweat and tears, dripping
out of fear, slipping
heart of mine,  ripping
loss of hope, crippling
bottomless pit, i'm dipping
two sides of a coin, flipping
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Submitted on September 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxaa BBBB cccccc BBBB aaaxaa BBBB aaaaaa
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,022
Words 207
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 4, 6, 4, 6

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