Analysis of Self Sacrifice



How can I offer you
what you need
if what you need
isn't from me?

I am helpless
failing
falling
and you watch
observing
silent
motionless
as I slit my wrist.

Pain
it is unbearable
but I carry on
wanting
hoping
wishing
because
I
love
you.


Scheme ABBX CDDXDXCX XXXDDDXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 111 1111 1011 1110 10 10 011 010 10 100 11111 1 110100 11101 10 10 10 01 1 1 1
Characters 216
Words 46
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 10
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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