Analysis of Our very first day
Hey, this is our very first day together,
I'm so excited as if I had never
Had anyone so close to me
I just wish you would never leave me
Hey, this is our very first day
The clouds are grey, the sky is blue
I surely had no clue
Of how strong my feelings are for you
Hey, this is our very first day together
You shall spill all your secrets away
Tell me everything you've never thought you'd say
Please dear, don't stop halfway
Hey, this is our very first day
The clouds are grey, the sky is blue
I surely had no clue
Of all these feelings for you
Hey, this is our very first day together
Do you think we will stay like that forever?
Would you find me clever
If I said that I'd leave you never?
| Scheme | Aabb CDdd Accc CDdd Aaaa |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (40%) Etheree (20%) |
| Metre | 111101011010 11010111110 1101111 111111011 111101011 01110111 110111 111110111 111101011010 111111001 1110110111 111111 111101011 01110111 110111 1111011 111101011010 11111111010 111110 111111110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 675 |
| Words | 141 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 107 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
Font size:
Submitted on October 09, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
- 43 sec read
- 0 Views
0 fans
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"Our very first day" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/81287/our-very-first-day>.
Powered by CITE.ME
Discuss this Shir Hanochi poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In