Analysis of I'm Taking Beauty Back



BEAUTY
It's what society tells me to be.
It is a prison, I am inside just waiting
Until the day I can't stand up and tell them:

"Look, this is me! I don't care what you say. I am beautiful in HIS eyes!"

But I am struggling to break free; I am still a slave to THEIR beauty.
So in this prison I stay
Hypnotized by their lies that get under my skin:
"Nip this! Tuck in that!
You're too big, you're too thin!"
I just can't win!
No matter how hard I try to follow their rules, it's NEVER good enough!

I am sick and tired of working to meet their expectations;
Trying to reach their levels of perfection. I can't do it!
No matter what I do, I will never be beautiful in THEIR eyes.

That is why I am taking BEAUTY back!

I can no longer stay in this prison called society,
I can no longer follow their rules!
It will never be good enough, so honestly, why try anymore?

I know God sees my BEAUTY; it's true.
I am precious in HIS eyes!

My last word to society: Look! This is me! I don't care what you say. I am beautiful in HIS eyes!


Scheme AAXX B AXCXCCX XXB X AXX XB B
Poetic Form
Metre 10 1101001111 110101101110 01011111011 111111111111100011 111100111111011110 1011011 10111111011 11101 111111 1111 110111111011110101 111010110111010 101111010101111 11011111101100011 1111110101 111101011010100 111101011 1110110111001101 111111011 1110011 11110100111111111111100011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,007
Words 211
Sentences 23
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 7, 3, 1, 3, 2, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on March 13, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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