Analysis of I Don't Like It



Religion...
I just don't like it.
When I think about my thoughts on it,
I go in a nagging pit.

Religion causes things
That are horrid, racists, bad.
But I know my thoughts on religion
Would make my mother sad.

All religion does is separate us from each other,
In an unwanted way,
And I just have to write about it,
Right now, today.

Now I know most of you would disagree,
But I hate religion for separating us, making us mad.
And don't even start to say I'm wrong,
Because I've decided, so too bad.

I just gotta get this on paper,
So I can feel unpressurized and at peace,
So I must tell you
I hate religion no matter how you crease
it..............................


Scheme ABBB XCAC DEBE XCXC DFXFB
Poetic Form
Metre 010 11111 111011111 1100101 010101 1110101 111111010 111101 1010111011110 010101 011111011 1101 1111111001 111010110011011 011011111 01110111 111011110 11110100011 11111 11010110111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 645
Words 125
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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doodlegirl

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