Blue One (edited)



Like the morning dew
Your smile withdrew.
A sight of feelings colored in blue.
You reacted as if you had the flu.

Why did you ignore me?
I've never done anything to you except love you!
You seem like you're in a different world,
Oblivious to everyone.

I asked for love.
But gave me none what so ever.
I looked up and screamed.
My heart is longing for love.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAA XAXX BXXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 345
Words 69
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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