Analysis of Breezy Breeze



The breezy breeze w/ the windy mists kiss her
dry,parched,lovelorn tulip lips
Blowing her long,long,black,wavy hair w/ the
air of freedom foaming forever in sunshine
and spring
Is it my fault my dear,dearest doll that I
fell in love w/ you forever so long
You don`t even admit my faults,you say
religion,familial fops can`t unite us,cannot
make us wedlock
Wrong,wrong,wrong
You`re my Heaven,you`re my church,temple
Mosque;In You I find Mahomet,Buddha,God`s
Son,rose,tulip,marigold
Breezy air below the breeze of dawn conspire
to oust the brides of the twilight-zone
Your breasts beckon me to examine any foreign
fawns,I forward to touch them but my fingers
get frozen,numb,and fall to the tempetations
of Eve and Adam.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJEKBIALMNBO
Poetic Form
Metre 0101100010110 1101 100111000 11101001001 01 111111111 101100101011 111001111 11111 111 1 11111 11111 1 101010111010 11011011 1110110101010 1101111110 111101 11010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 699
Words 134
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 580
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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