Breezy Breeze



The breezy breeze w/ the windy mists kiss her
dry,parched,lovelorn tulip lips
Blowing her long,long,black,wavy hair w/ the
air of freedom foaming forever in sunshine
and spring
Is it my fault my dear,dearest doll that I
fell in love w/ you forever so long
You don`t even admit my faults,you say
religion,familial fops can`t unite us,cannot
make us wedlock
Wrong,wrong,wrong
You`re my Heaven,you`re my church,temple
Mosque;In You I find Mahomet,Buddha,God`s
Son,rose,tulip,marigold
Breezy air below the breeze of dawn conspire
to oust the brides of the twilight-zone
Your breasts beckon me to examine any foreign
fawns,I forward to touch them but my fingers
get frozen,numb,and fall to the tempetations
of Eve and Adam.
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJEKBIALMNBO
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 699
Words 134
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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