Analysis of Breezy Breeze
The breezy breeze w/ the windy mists kiss her
dry,parched,lovelorn tulip lips
Blowing her long,long,black,wavy hair w/ the
air of freedom foaming forever in sunshine
and spring
Is it my fault my dear,dearest doll that I
fell in love w/ you forever so long
You don`t even admit my faults,you say
religion,familial fops can`t unite us,cannot
make us wedlock
Wrong,wrong,wrong
You`re my Heaven,you`re my church,temple
Mosque;In You I find Mahomet,Buddha,God`s
Son,rose,tulip,marigold
Breezy air below the breeze of dawn conspire
to oust the brides of the twilight-zone
Your breasts beckon me to examine any foreign
fawns,I forward to touch them but my fingers
get frozen,numb,and fall to the tempetations
of Eve and Adam.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJEKBIALMNBO |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101100010110 1101 100111000 11101001001 01 111111111 101100101011 111001111 11111 111 1 11111 11111 1 101010111010 11011011 1110110101010 1101111110 111101 11010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 699 |
Words | 134 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 580 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 112 |
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Submitted on June 12, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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