Analysis of 21 Winter/21 Spring



21 Winter/21 Spring
She`s 21 today(100503-100582)
a rare beauty/mystified mystery
temple goer,Gujrat`s gift
Proud pinnacle/picturesque pic
Bow-tight-beauty,eastern,exotic
Dreams-catcher/sleeplessness pill
make me daydreams,make me screams deep in the
night while the daisies,daffodils dance in
the summer breeze;21 Winter,21 spring
We have no more Troy,no more chain of ships
to drown,to burn w/ your beauty
Time has changed;Around isn`t same
People have no more shame or sense
Nudity,desperity,War,Captivity,Freedom to
Infinity parade unbarred through the streets
Of the 21st Century
Arti is 21,I wish her my wish,may she become
What she want to become unto this Gallery
Of sun,moon,church,temple,mosque,machines


Scheme ABCDEAFGHAICJKLMCNCI
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 101 101 011010100 1011 11001001 111 11011 11111100 110110 0101101 111111111 111100110 11111 10111111 11 0100011101 101100 1111011101 111101101100 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 694
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 586
Words per stanza (avg) 96
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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