Analysis of Creating A Commotion



Telling people who can't make a cake.
To get out of the kitchen.
Can create a commotion.
And,
Calling people imitating fakes.
Will burn a bridge overheated until it falls.
And...
Up and down a Rollercoaster goes.
But nobody knows,
Who sits take another ride.
And...
Why do people stay surprised by what is seen,
To see...
Over.
And over again.

Why do people stay surprised by what is seen,
To see.
Over.
And over again.

Telling people who can't make a cake.
To get out of the kitchen.
Can create a commotion.
And...
Calling people imitating fakes.
Will burn a bridge overheated until it falls.
And,
Up and down a Rollercoaster goes.
But nobody knows,
Who sits to take another ride.
And...
People act as if they are surprised to see,
What they've seen to see it seen over again!

And this commotion stays in motion,
Never to end.
Over again.
This commotion stays in motion.
Never to end.
This commotion stays in motion.
Never to end.
This commotion stays in motion!


Scheme ABBCDECFFgCHIJK HIJK ABBCDECFFgCik bLkBLBLB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 101011101 1111010 1010010 0 10101001 11011000111 0 10101001 111 1110101 0 11101011111 11 10 01001 11101011111 11 10 01001 101011101 1111010 1010010 0 10101001 11011000111 0 10101001 111 11110101 0 10111110111 11111111001 010101010 1011 1001 10101010 1011 10101010 1011 10101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 966
Words 215
Sentences 32
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 15, 4, 13, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Written on June 13, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 13, 2023

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