Analysis of Utter Submission



If you have a problem then I have a plan
Let me tell you as I gently stroke your hand

I will listen intently to your every word
Your voice will be the only thing heard

Here's a shoulder on which to cry
It will be there till the day I die

My eyes will never on another woman linger
I'm to tightly wrapped around your finger

I live off the warmth of your inner fire
And doing your bidding is my only desire

I'll be your play toy, make me your slave
Teach me how you like to misbehave

What I'm saying girl is there's no cure
This is a love you just have to endure.......


Scheme XX AA BB CC CC DD EE
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11101011101 11111110111 1110010111001 111101011 10101111 111110111 1111010101010 1110101110 11101111010 0101101110010 111111111 11111101 111011111 1101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 573
Words 123
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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When real love takes control...

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Written on December 28, 2022

Submitted by jerrylogie on December 28, 2022

Modified on May 02, 2023

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