Analysis of The Wicked Priest



Hands outstretched, in cupping shape
Tinged with guilt, they cannot wait
An empty host sits in their hands
Lo the Eucharist;  God understands
The stole of virtue, threadbear and worn
A vow chastity, broken and torn
Now to the lips, the cup we press
Abused and broken--emblems bless’d
Pray now the prayer of sinners scorn
Lift up the chalice, oh priest forlorn
And in thine hands the beads move on
Pray now the prayer of sinners scorn
Prayer beads barb and prick the soul
Though dead inside, he wears the stole
The weighted mass of human flesh
Stacked in pews, clean and fresh
He prays the prayer and chants the chant
Yet ne'er ascends from sinner’s hands
Each mortal sin is passed along
And to the grave--it won’t be long
For sin and death are merely words
Spoken in sermon, yet unobserved
A vestment worn that sets aside
The holy order from sin outside
A thurible comes to clean and cleanse
With torrid fumes of recompense
To bind and burn each deed of dread
Whose hellish chains secure the dead
No altar hides their sin and shame
Of youth defiled, whose names we name
Oh sounding brass and tinkling cymbal
A cantor sings, but he now trembles
While at the pearly gate of death he waits
What of his soul? What is his fate?
A millstone hangs around his neck
Into the deep, now a mere speck
Oh, that he had never been born
Yet he defiled and felt God’s scorn

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Poetic Form
Metre 101011 1111101 11011011 10100101 01110101 011001001 11010111 01010101 11011101 110101101 00110111 11011101 1110101 11011101 01011101 101101 11010101 11011101 11011101 01011111 11011101 1001011 0111101 010101111 0111101 1101110 11011111 11010101 11011101 1111111 1101010010 01011111 1101011111 11111111 0110111 01011011 11111011 1110111 101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,398
Words 259
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 38, 1
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 552
Words per stanza (avg) 129

About this poem

Any resemblance to real persons or other real-life entities is purely coincidental. All characters and other entities appearing in this poem are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, dead or alive, or other real-life entities, past or present, is purely coincidental.

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Written on December 31, 2022

Submitted by brian.duffin on December 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brian Duffin

After taking an English class with a focus on literature and poetry, Brian Duffin discovered a love for words and a passion for poetry. Brian's poems reflect his love of nature, while also sharing the raw human emotions and events that fill and shape his life. more…

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