Analysis of Living with myself



Flesh and blood
Standing in front of you
My vessel filled with water and meat roaming in my body
Cut me open and see that I am living with myself
        With
My abusers
My pain
My Trauma
My history
My wounds
My neglectful parent
My absent father
My late sister

I am living with you
All of you


Scheme XABXXXXXBXXCC AA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (47%)
Metre 101 100111 110111001100110 1110011111011 1 1010 11 110 1100 11 101010 11010 1110 111011 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 304
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 13, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by gemimalongondjo on December 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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