Analysis of BLOW JOB

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



The moon is now glowing bright against the color of your skin no longer is your hair covered in sunlight. my head is like a record it just keeps spinning until you revealed my thoughts.

I could not speak one damn  single sound, I could only release a soft moan, hell you have no clue how much I wanted to scream in sheer delight I always cum too late

You sang me to sleep with your sweet voice only for you to leave for the night leaving room to enter my dreams

I am a 2 headed monster you play so well with both of them still find yourself only calling one by name

Is this another one of your mind fucks or amazing blow jobs they both make a mess of my head


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Characters 662
Words 139
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 104
Words per line (avg) 27
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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Submitted by Oakley on November 13, 2022

Modified by Oakley on December 18, 2022

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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