Analysis of Battlefield



On a landscape littered with bad decisions
exists a minefield of pain and regret.
There, you exploded into my heart
and inflicted a wound I can’t forget.

As I retreat to the DM zone
please understand, I want to be brave.
But I’m fighting for so many things
that I have no idea how to save.

Like the curve of your face
the taste of your skin
or the look in your eyes
as I take you in.

Now I’d crawl across the ruin
throughout the bombed-out terrain
and surrender to my captors
just to hear you call my name.

In the silence when the battle’s over
after the rebuilding has begun
I will look into your eyes
and you will tell me that we’ve won.


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCDC EXXX XEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (35%)
Metre 1011011010 010111001 110100111 0010011101 11011011 10111111 111011101 1111010111 101111 01111 101011 11110 11101010 0101101 00101110 1111111 0010101010 100010101 1110111 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 659
Words 142
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

A reflection on the heart battling the pain of unrequited love.

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Written on December 30, 2021

Submitted by IndigoHeart on October 29, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Gina Madeya

I'm a hopeless romantic who attempts to write when inspiration strikes or life stirs my soul.. Born on the East Coast, now living in the PNW, I'm a Realtor by day and would-be poet by night. A reader, wine lover and foodie, I enjoy this space for creative outlet more…

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