Analysis of Grayish Blue
Brent J.W. Foreman 1983 (Bremerton)
Grayish Blue,
as she opens her eyes
breaths deep and cries,
the first thing she hears is,
"Daddy loves you he's right here".
soothing my voice calming all fear,
she finds her focus and there I appear.
As my thoughts shatter
in that moment nothing else matter,
Just me and my angel first born of twins.
Ashlee....
so, this is true love
this is how it begins,
a stir in the chest lightheaded with spins
that soon overcome by laughter, giggles and grins.
| Scheme | ABBCDEEFFGAHGGG |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Tetractys (47%) |
| Metre | 101 111001 1101 011111 1011111 10111011 1101001101 11110 011010110 1101101111 1 11111 111101 010011011 11101101001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 453 |
| Words | 94 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 15 |
| Lines Amount | 15 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 350 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 83 |
About this poem
about my twin daughters
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Written on October 01, 2022
Submitted by LOONe on October 01, 2022
Modified on May 03, 2023
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