Grayish Blue

Brent J.W. Foreman 1983 (Bremerton)



Grayish Blue,
as she opens her eyes
breaths deep and cries,
the first thing she hears is,
"Daddy loves you he's right here".
soothing my voice calming all fear,
she finds her focus and there I appear.
As my thoughts shatter
in that moment nothing else matter,
Just me and my angel first born of twins.
Ashlee....
so, this is true love
this is how it begins,
a stir in the chest lightheaded with spins
that soon overcome by laughter, giggles and grins.

About this poem

about my twin daughters

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Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by LOONe on October 01, 2022

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCDEEFFGAHGGG
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 453
Words 94
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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