Analysis of HORMONAL IMBALANCE
Penman 1990 (Enugu state)
If this is love then I'm not sure
I've had feelings before unlike this measure
Crept into me as rhythmic snail
Leaving me with slippery saliva to nail
Friendship has splendours
But love knows not to adore
It grows stronger when crossed
Whereas obstacles kill love
Friendship resists times
Which wearies and severs couples at times
It's has heights unknown to love
Oh! I've really found my love
My friend, my neighbour, my choice
My line, my ribs, now I can rejoice
My soulmate, my gist mate,
My cook, my warmer and classmate
I love you so much baby
May you live long, I'm ready
To be with you forever
So help me God, the mover
| Scheme | XABB CXXD CCDD CCEE FFAA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) Etheree (20%) |
| Metre | 11111111 11100101110 10111101 101110001011 1011 1111101 111011 0110011 10011 110101011 1110111 1110111 111111 111111101 11111 1111001 1111110 1111110 1111010 1111010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 654 |
| Words | 127 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 99 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
This poem talks about a new found lover after a breakup with another lover. An unusual lover. I was in a relationship that nearly sent me to early grave but was finally broken and later, I got a true and best lover that I never could have imagined in life. I feel so happy and strong; rejuvenated my mental and emotional state; and same is my wish for everyone in the world. Life is not as you think. Whenever you lose someone so dare to you, don't be down caste, only believe, the best is yet to come and those old bad memories forgotten in a minute. more »
Written on August 01, 2022
Submitted by Penman on August 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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