Analysis of WAS SHE WRONG FOR LOVING ME???



What is love, can someone tell me,
I thought I knew, I thought it had found me,
I had fallen in love, and she had also fallen for me,
I put up a fight, and she also fought hard for me,
We were happy, I had surely found the one for me,
For a minute there, she meant the whole world to me,
 It was amazing, but she just wasn't meant for me,
She loved me, but she was forbidden to be with me,
I'd have done anything, but sadly it wasn’t up to me,
We were in love, but I decided it wasn't meant to be,
She was my everything, but I knew I had to set her free,
It was so hard, over time that love had really grown on me,
For long I felt her absence, she had left a vacuum in me,
I grieved, I just couldn't accept she was no longer with me,
She was my everything, and yet we weren't meant to be,
so tell me, does love sprout where it's not supposed to be,
I loved her and her me, but they ridiculed her for loving me,
love is love, it chose to grow in her just like it had chosen me,
I love her and she loves me, that will always be enough for me,
Perhaps a day will come and they will decide to let us be.


Scheme AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 1111111 1111111111 111001011101011 1110101101111 1010111010111 101011101111 1101011110111 1111111001111 1111011011111 10011110110111 11110111111101 111110111110111 111101011101001 111110011111011 1111001110111 1111111110111 110001111001101 1111111001111101 110011111110111 01011101111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,101
Words 255
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 817
Words per stanza (avg) 236

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We fell in love and for a moment it was beautiful, but we weren't meant to be lovers.

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Written on June 18, 2022

Submitted by Daktari on June 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:18 min read
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Kennedy Mwangi

Gemini. Born and raised in Nairobi, Kenya. Bsc, Biochemistry. more…

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