Analysis of YOU, WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME?

Kennedy Mwangi 1998 (Nairobi)



I've been reading books, really trying to find something new,
Studied the stars, trying to understand this thing about you,
talked to sages, but I still can't explain what I feel about you,
this sensation I feel, touches my soul whenever I see you,
now my heart is full, for every chamber has a piece of you,
my mind is calm, cause all the storms are afraid of you,
you can look inside me, for my soul is an open book to you,
I have no darkness, cause you brought the light with you,
I'm even stronger, it's like day after day I'm energized by you,
All the books I read, can't seem to explain this feeling about you,
All I know is that, my heart led me straight and true to you,
and now I'm mesmerized and belong to none other but you.


Scheme AAAAAAAAAAAA
Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 11101101011101 10011010111011 1110111101111011 1010111011010111 1111111001010111 1111110110111 1110111111110111 111101110111 1101011110111011 1011111101110011 11111111110111 01110001111011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 735
Words 155
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 562
Words per stanza (avg) 144

About this poem

Ever loved someone so much that you can't help but wonder what they did to you?

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Written on June 18, 2022

Submitted by Daktari on June 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kennedy Mwangi

Gemini. Born and raised in Nairobi, Kenya. Bsc, Biochemistry. more…

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