Analysis of Darkness blackness



Become naked before me
Peel off your clothes so I can see

No more lies only exposed skin
Pretense is replaced by the sin

Your truth is ugly underneath
Bloodstained sword pulled from its sheath

Lay back now and take me inside
In your nakedness I will hide

I will forget who I am in you
We can become one out of two

Tell me all the things you’re ashamed of
It won’t matter because I’m in love

The darkness in you pours out like night
But I hate the sun so let’s turn out the light

This is ecstasy as we scream
An unending nightmarish dream

We lie here naked in bed
Finally, nothing left unsaid


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH II
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 0110011 11111111 11110011 0111101 1111001 111111 11101101 011111 110111101 11011111 111011011 111001101 010011111 11101111101 11100111 1010101 1111001 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 626
Words 136
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted by c_fuqua on February 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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