Analysis of Poetry Contest

Walt Sisikin 1953 (Santiago)



Poetry Contest
I once entered a poetry contest and lost
I thought the poem was good, that I would be able to boast
My friends supported my opinion about the poem, it was great, it was the best
The poem was submitted with such certainty and hope
That it would win first place, it was submitted at my friend’s behest
But, it lacked a certain flair, certain words did not make it better, nope
At the time of submission, my mind was muddled by the offered prize
The prize was big, bigger than I have ever seen, it was of great size
It didn’t matter that the poem was really lousy, it didn’t make sense
I was looking at the poem as an astronomer looks at the stars, through a lense
Only certain words mattered, the ones found buried in a dictionary
The big words that only poets could understand
Everything else about the poem was inhibitory
An everyday person reading the poem, the words could not withstand
However, reading the poem people did
To criticize it.  I read the criticisms and hid
This is how to lose a poetry contest
Write a lousy poem thinking it was good, thinking it was the best


Scheme ABCADADEEFEGHGHIIAA
Poetic Form
Metre 10010 111001001001 110101111111011 110101010010101111101 01010101110001 1111111101011101 11101011011111101 10110101111010101 01111011110111111 11101010110101111 111010101101001101101 10101100111000100 01111010101 1010101010100 11011010010011101 1010010101 110111010001 11111010010 10101010111101101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,098
Words 205
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 867
Words per stanza (avg) 205

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Just another lousy poem

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Written on February 08, 2022

Submitted by wsisikin on February 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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