Analysis of Invincible



Unlimited powers, faster than anything you’ve ever seen,
That’s the way I feel when you’re beside me as my queen.
Your endearing love is the source of my energy,
Makes even the harshest days a better place to be.

More than just your presence but your simple existence,
I feel that I can go further, beyond any distance,
See the earth unfold beneath my feet, see the horizon & beyond…
You gave my life direction, stronger than any bound.

Like I am your Superman and you are my Lois Lane

Just a glance at your eyes breaks apart my armour and makes me defenceless,
Your bright smile brings me to my knees, leaving me breathless.
Hearing your voice soothes all the craziness that’s going through my mind,
Only one person makes me feel this way,

Baby you're one of a kind

Guess having someone makes it feel like you’re flying,
And when they’re not around, you just feel like dying.
Like finding your way when you’re feeling lost or everything’s going wrong,
Kind of like a little child searching for where they belong.

Feels like Romeo & Juliet, like Adam & Eve or many others throughout history…

Just like them or put simply…just….

You & me


Scheme AABB CCXX X CXDX D EEFF B X B
Poetic Form
Metre 010010101101101 1011111011111 1010110111100 1100101010111 1111101110010 11111110011010 1010101111001001 1111010101101 11111000111101 1011111011100111 1111111110110 1011110100110111 1011011111 1011101 11011111110 011101111110 1101111101110101 11101011011101 11101011011101001100 11111101 11
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,170
Words 230
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

Happy times a life long time ago

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Written on 2008

Submitted by edilions on January 12, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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