Analysis of Flames of pain
The young woman stares into the blazing red of the candle flame,
On the tip of her tongue is the most sacred thing to her: her husband's name.
She turns her tear filled eyes to his unmoving figure,
Remembering the moments when he rescued her from his mother's rigor.
The women of the village drag her into the house mercilessly,
Wiping the vermillion of her hairline unceremoniously.
They claw at the golden and black necklace resting on her collarbone,
About the misfortune of a widowed woman they drone.
The tears roll down her cheeks as they drape her in white,
They whisper about how she is a pitiful sight.
She gasps for air as she finally understands her situation,
There won't be one, but two cremations.
The death of her husband signed her fate,
She is going to die a torturous death on the pyre of her mate.
She screams as a woman yanks at her necklace,
Her mother-in-law steps forward and slaps her across the face.
She finally accepts her fate, as the women force her to stand steadily on the ground,
She sobs hysterically, blocking out any sound.
She watches with pain as her son lights the funeral pyre,
With a final anguished scream she hurls herself into the fire.
Scheme | AABB CCDD EEXF GGFF HHBB |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) |
Metre | 0110101010110101 101101101101100101 11011111110 010001011100111010 01010101001011000 10001010101000 1110100110101010 01001010101011 011101111001 1100111101001 111111100010010 1111111 011010101 11101101011010101 11101011010 010011100100101 1100010110101011100101 11100101101 110111011010010 1010101110101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,188 |
Words | 236 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 188 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 42 |
About this poem
"Sati was a custom religiously followed by a few, toed halfheartedly by rather more, sidestepped by many and ignored by most” ― Tim Mackintosh-Smith
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Written on December 01, 2021
Submitted by Coco1808! on December 01, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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