Analysis of World tour

Pin Lim 1982 (Montreal)



I might not be the ideal match for you but who really is?
Perfection is only an ideology look too long and you'll miss
The right person might be standing in front of you who knows
To take a leapt of faith and see where this journey goes

To a place anywhere around the world just you & me
To city skies and mountains beyond where your eyes can see
Doesn't matter where we end up because I have the perfect view
To wake up each day and still can't believe it's you

Nothing is a guarantee and mistakes are bound to be made
No relationship is ever smooth sailing so don't be afraid
Whatever comes our way we'll learn through trials and errors
Because I'll be the rock that holds you strong at my centre

To the outcome for whatever that may be but know this my dear
To let you know that I'll cherish you faithfully for this I swear
To create lifetime moments to fly to every place and destinations
Anything feels possible for there's no lack of my imagination


Scheme XXAA BBCC DDXX XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 111100111111101 01011010100111011 01101110011111 1101110111101 101100101111 11010100111111 1010111101110011 111110110111 10100100111111 101011011011101 10110111110010 01110111111110 10111011111111 1111111011001111 10111011110010010 1011001111110010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 957
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Written on July 05, 2021

Submitted by edilions on October 09, 2021

Modified on May 02, 2023

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