Analysis of Diamonds, Pearl's and Rust



A poem....Diamonds, Peals  and Rust

I caught the scent of dessert sands,
There was the fall of reason in the Holy Lands
For  your love, I am enslaved
The road to you heart has been paved,
With Rust,  Diamonds and Pearl's
While in the sandstorm the Angels twirl.

I have been waiting so long to find
Someone I could love with a beautiful mind.

But the touch  of you kisses could not dismiss
The monster that was the past.
These times of love, you know they don't last.

Your love  I've seen was pain and agony
From it's power I could not break free.
Thus  for your love I was a fool
To allow you to be so cruel.

My love took me to such dizzying heights.
Now I must suffer retribution rites.
There was only that one thing, your bite
And no daylight could come shed it's light.

Oh father. I have sinned
For I want to love him again.
The sand storm in the hourglass
Was a whirlwind of desire.
Try as I may, I could not light your fire.

I granted you love far above your Ken,
For you would become the envy of men.
Whatever my vices you will spend
You days on earth as if in heaven.

You didn't understand my love, you didn't understand my need.
You treated me with contempt,
Before the fatal kisses started  to bleed.

The restless storm of a hearts dispair.
It is the thorn of the rose that  we share.
Here is to all I give advice;
To seek love, you'll pay a price.

A curse that haunts a thirsty tomb,
But for truth, there is no room.
And we suffer all the more
If love be love, we must be sure.

And when fortune meets the eye.
We'll see the storm clouds in the sky.
At the reflection in the mirror we stare
At all the bleeding wounds that we see there.

My wounds are open flowers
And they have bloomed for thee.
To help our heart stop bleeding
I accept your apology.

You are the truth and agony.
Love must be proved, it is plain to see.
Must we be tortured on a bed of lust?
We hold on to Diamonds,  Pearl's and Rust.

I had suffered and you came
To set my world right again.
You are the balm for my pain.
You will take the blood from my veins.

The need was dire, the rites were wrong,
And the flowers burst forth in song.
Here is a kiss that is so sublime and
Taste of  your lips the flavor of clementine.

My fall was complete
Here comes the funeral pyre.
Oh so sweet was my desire.
That wrecked the heart withing my breast
And deposited my soul into emptiness.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01101 11011011 110111000101 1111101 01111111 111001 10010101 111101111 1111101001 10111101101 0101101 111111111 1111110100 111011111 11111101 101111110 1111111001 111100101 111011111 01111111 110111 11111101 0110010 1011010 11111111110 1101110111 1110101011 10110111 111111010 11001111100111 1101101 01010101011 010110101 1101101111 11111101 1111101 01110101 1111111 0110101 11111111 0110101 11011001 10010001011 1101011111 1111010 011111 11101110 10110100 11010100 111111111 1111010111 111110101 1110011 1111101 1101111 11101111 01110101 00101101 1101111010 1111010110 11101 11010010 11111010 1101111 001001101100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,320
Words 467
Sentences 40
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 2, 3, 4, 4, 5, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 65
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem is about the difficulties in having a relationship. Where there is love abdvwhrrevtherevis the lack of it.

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Written on September 15, 2021

Submitted by b4melodyonline on September 30, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:23 min read
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Melody Moreno-Vazquez

I am 61 and a product of rural Oklahoma. I did get out and see the world but came back to the state where I grew up to live and write poems...which is the focus of my life. more…

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