Analysis of Schizophrenia Lullaby

Claudia Krizay 1956 (Washington DC)



Rock yourself to sleep,
To the screaming symphonies that wreak havoc within your mind.
Rock, gently rock, to and fro-

The fire beneath your bed shall sear the voices of demons-
And the dark angels shall chase away your fears.
Rock, gently rock,
The people who made their homes inside your mind
Shall not abandon you-

Visions of snakes constricting your mother’s severed arm
Shall someday fade away.
Crossing that bridge over troubled rivers of deceit
Shall take you to faraway places
Where you scream with the children and chant with the saints.

This world is closing in on you-
So rock, gently rock, to and fro…
Do not fall off your ship and drown in oceans of suspicion-
I sing you soothing tunes in a language only you can comprehend.
Do not listen to the evil voices, but only to the kind ones-

Rock, gently rock in your solitude.
Lock the door to your mind and shut the demons out.
Paint pictures of endless fields of wild violets blossoming
Where the voices are your friends-
Never let anyone take that away from you.

Rock, gently rock, to and fro…
You have dreams of power and control-
A dream that shall not be snatched away.

So rock, gently rock, to and fro, to and fro…
Perhaps tomorrow the sun shall rise in the world that is your own…


Scheme xaB cxxad xexxx dbxxc xxxxd Bxe bx
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 101010011100111 1101101 010011111010110 00110110111 1101 01011110111 110101 1011010110101 11101 1011101010101 111110110 111101001101 11110011 11101101 111111010101010 1111010010101101 11101010101101011 11010110 101111010101 110110111100100 1010111 10110110111 1101101 111110001 011111101 11101101101 010101110011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,265
Words 232
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 5, 5, 5, 3, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by claudiakrizay on September 15, 2021

Modified on April 15, 2023

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Claudia Krizay

I am a 65 year old woman living with schizophrenia. My poetry is an expression of my inner self and my way of coping with difficult times and enjoying good times through my writing and artwork I have found a place for myself in this world. more…

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