Analysis of Remember hee
When the rain came
And you became wet
When you let your hair run loose
Wiping the falling pearls of your moonlike face
I lost my senses for a moment
I wanted to say….
But the words got in the way,
You know, yesterday, you looked pretty.
When your eyes wandered over the sea
Sitting by the edge of the cliff
Shivering in the moist air
You let a smile escape
I stared at your divine presence
Completely lost in the dreams
My heart longing to hold your hand
Trying never to bid adieu,
You know, yesterday, you looked pretty
Everytime your lips curved
Melting the music in the air
Everytime you became quite
Seemed like ages have passed
When you turned and looked at me
Your lovely eyes hiding the mysteries
The depths yet to be explored
I felt you are too precious
Wishing if the time were to stop
Letting me treasure you forever
You know, yesterday, you looked pretty.
When you stumbled over the rocks
You let me hold you for a moment
My heart skipped a beat
Trust, however little, you had showed in me
Made me feel. for the virgin time, like a man
Friends like you make the world a better place
Defying the logic of distance
You will always remain a part of me
You know, yesterday, you looked pretty.
When you wrapped the black around
It seemed moon has come out of the cloud
When your friends teased you about someone
Who was dying to be with you
You let a shy smile play on your rosy petals
Making me wonder about the fairyland
From where you must have come
To light the lives of us mortals
I folded my hands and offered a prayer secretly
To the one who had carved you
You know, yesterday, you looked pretty.
Surprised you might be
Why I could not muster the courage that day
But I had it all of it and none
Fearing you might be offended
If I could not do justice
Because seeing whom even the moon shies away
The sun fades before whose aura of beauty
Fragrance of whom scents the mist
Fragility of who embarrasses the flowers
Who makes you wish every day
If the world were to remain so beautiful forever;
You know, yesterday, you looked pretty.
Scheme | xxxabccD dxexfxghD xexxdxxixjD xbxdxafdD xxkhlgxldhDdckxicdxxcjD |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (20%) |
Metre | 1011 01011 1111111 1001011111 111101010 11011 1011001 11101110 111101001 10101101 1000011 110101 11110110 0101001 11101111 10101101 11101110 10111 10010001 101011 111011 1110111 1101100100 0111101 1111110 10101011 101101010 11101110 11101001 111111010 11101 1101011101 11110101101 1111010101 010010110 111010111 11101110 1110101 111111101 11111011 11101111 110111111010 1011001010 111111 11011110 1101101001100 1011111 11101110 01111 11111001011 111111101 10111010 1111110 011011001101 01101110110 1011101 0100110100010 11111001 10101011100010 11101110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,990 |
Words | 389 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 9, 11, 9, 23 |
Lines Amount | 60 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 326 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 78 |
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Memories of the days went by
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