Analysis of AERIAL TIGER

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



An aerial tiger
A paper balloon,
The breeze rises high
To the man in the moon.

Nobody worries
No one dares to move,
For it’s only your life
That you’re liable to lose.

The smog of the city
Is enveloping you,
With the aerial tiger
The low morning’s dew.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXB XXXX XCAC XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 110010 01001 01101 101001 110 11111 111011 1110011 011010 101001 1010010 01101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 317
Words 59
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This is one of my earliest surviving poems. It was written during my wannabee psychaedelic stage.

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Written on 1974

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on September 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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