Analysis of Little Birds and Carousels

john mckiernan 1953 (Australia)



falling leaves and whispering trees
 the spoggie now feels ill at ease
 perched so high if not by chance
 a sun beam yields a new romance
 the carousel a grey cloud looms
 lifes ups and downs you left too soon
 the park bench creaks a statley home
 if i had wings you'd not be alone.


Scheme AABBCDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 10101001 0111111 1111111 01110101 0100111 11011111 0111011 111111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 283
Words 55
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 220
Words per stanza (avg) 55
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Submitted by johnm.66013 on July 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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