Analysis of THE WAILING CITY

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



The wailing city weeps
For those who once lived there,
But no-one now remains
All life is gone from here.

The wailing city mourns
For the better times long past,
When people filled its streets
Times now left behind.

The wailing city longs
For the returns of its residents,
Taken away by evil forces
In a time now long spent.

A time when the city lived
People jostled through its thoroughfares,
Animals walked along its roads
Yet now no creatures reside there.

It once was a vibrant city
A pillar upon the planet,
Now it's just a ghost town
Oh, so easy to forget.

No-one ever stops there now
It's left off most local maps,
A slice of recent history
No researcher ever taps.

The wailing city cries
For lost glories of the past,
But just as the good die young
Nothing worthwhile ever lasts.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXX XBXX XXXX XXXA CXXX XDCD XBXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 111111 111101 111111 010101 1010111 110111 11101 010101 100111100 100111010 001111 0110101 10101110 10010111 11110011 11101010 01001010 111011 1110101 1110111 1111101 01110100 1100101 010101 1110101 1110111 1011101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 832
Words 155
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

The wailing city weeps For those who once lived there, But no-one now remains All life is gone from here.

Font size:
 

Written on June 28, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

47 sec read
5

Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

All Phil Roberts poems | Phil Roberts Books

7 fans

Discuss this Phil Roberts poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "THE WAILING CITY" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/103794/the-wailing-city>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    19
    hours
    50
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    A poem that has no rhyme is called ________.
    A a ballad
    B a limerick
    C free verse
    D a song