Analysis of THE DEATH TRAIN



Late one misty night
An old steam train's rolling by,
Stopping for the newly dead
Or those about to die.

Yes, the death train is rolling
Along on rusty rails,
Taking soulless passengers
Along death's awful trail.

Skeletons and cadavers
Sit with the newly dead,
Riding out of the living world
To wherever the death train heads.

As it rolls on for eternity
There is no escaping the death train,
Picking up corpses, skulls, and the dying
Hurtling across sand-blown plains.

When the living hear its whistle
They know to stay safely locked inside,
Afraid to even watch the train
As it rattles on through the night.

The death train is coming
For everyone some night,
And hearing its unholy whistle
Many have died of fright.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABCB DXEX ECXX XFDX GXFA DAGA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 1111101 1010101 110111 1011110 011101 1010100 011101 1000010 110101 10110101 10100111 111110100 111010011 1011010010 1001111 10101110 111110101 01110101 11101101 011110 11011 010101010 101111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 765
Words 136
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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Late one misty night An old steam train's rolling by, Stopping for the newly dead Or those about to die.

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Written on June 19, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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