Analysis of THE BLACK AVENGER

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



The Black Avenger is creeping
Through a dark and horrid night,
As the guilty gone unpunished find
Today they’re sure to die.

The avenger metes out justice
For all the murders unhanged,
He hunts them down and punishes all
Across this malignant land.

The innocent are safe from
The avenger’s ruthless ways,
But all of the rapists outside gaol
Have met their final day.

The avenger’s seeking justice
Within this very unjust land,
And when justice cannot be found
He lends a striking hand.

The rich must pay their taxes
Or their lives will surely fall,
Unless they give a fair share out
The avenger will take it all.

And governments must stop the crimes
They commit against the poor,
For the avenger’s on the side of those
Whose life has taken a fall.

He’s not there for the hedonists
Unless it’s to cut them down,
The street folk and the needy are
Where his goodness does abound.

The Black Avenger is reaping
The lives of all the evil,
Sending them to meet their maker
As they go down to find the Devil.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXX CBDE XXDX CEFE XDXD XXXD CXXF AGXG XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01010110 1010101 101010101 011111 00101110 110101 111101001 0110101 0100111 01101 111010111 111101 011010 01110011 01101011 110101 0111110 1111101 01110111 00101111 01001101 1010101 10110111 1111001 111101 0111111 01100101 1110101 01010110 0111010 10111110 111111010 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,051
Words 193
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Horror poem about a night creature who avenges unpunished criminals!

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Written on September 07, 2011

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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